tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7502671215825340629.post3715724151236572441..comments2023-04-01T04:30:40.941-07:00Comments on Shine: The time has comeAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16239411640585535644noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7502671215825340629.post-3424656283277903392012-09-30T17:31:18.987-07:002012-09-30T17:31:18.987-07:00Thankee.
I was leaning towards the first one...an...Thankee. <br />I was leaning towards the first one...and coming up with a good title shouldn't be too hard this time. <br /><br />I really don't know much more about the second one than I what I put up there...and you're right about the first one already having a story goal. Which, for me, is huge. <br /><br /><br />Hmmm...as of right now, I think I'll go with 1. Yep.<br />Haha...yeeeeah...well, I appreciate that. :PAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16239411640585535644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7502671215825340629.post-2612034158387139292012-09-30T17:19:02.632-07:002012-09-30T17:19:02.632-07:00I would vote for 1. 2 is good, but markably less d...I would vote for 1. 2 is good, but markably less developed than 1. Also, 1 has a clear story goal. 2 has no clear goal, and a less clear conflict. In short, I just think 1 has a much clearer framework and skeleton, but of course, 2 could attain this as well. Maybe you know more about it than you wrote here.<br /><br />I'd want to read either one, of course, but 1 also intrigues me because it's comedy. That interests me. The plot is also pretty amusing just from the synopsis, although there's no way I'd read this if I didn't know it was written by a clean-writing Christian. :P Eli Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03702838613086613744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7502671215825340629.post-85407989223144654992012-09-30T17:01:54.111-07:002012-09-30T17:01:54.111-07:00Hey, Livvy! :)
Okay, thanks so much!
I miss a bu...Hey, Livvy! :)<br /><br />Okay, thanks so much!<br /><br />I miss a bunch of folks around OYAN too...been wanting to tell you, though...if you wanted to write letters, you can ask Kristin (Molihua97) for my address and tell her I said she can give it to you. ;) Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16239411640585535644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7502671215825340629.post-83865902296343534592012-09-30T16:52:06.992-07:002012-09-30T16:52:06.992-07:00Both of those sound fantastic, Anna...I think eith...Both of those sound fantastic, Anna...I think either of them would be a good choice.<br /><br />I'm going to vote for 1, though. Sounds funny and interesting - and the fact that there's a grandchild involved raises the stakes that might higher.<br /><br />We miss you around OYAN, by the way...Olivia Smithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06248659353869417682noreply@blogger.com